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Why do you finish these up within such a short time of posting them here? It seems kind of useless.

The face on the chick is kind of bugging me, particularly the bump on the far side of her face. It looks like an absurdly bulging brow, which has very little place on a female character.

Them shoulders are pretty huge too.

Something I'm worried about is how the junk is the only portion you put much effort into. The breasts and the genitals are all polished up fairly well, but then everything else is just thrown on as an afterthought. I get the idea that you may find it arousing or you really don't care enough to work on anything else, but it looks really, really shoddy. Furries ain't gonna care, but artists will.
Try not to fall into the trap of only finishing what you want to finish as fap fodder and then losing interest in the rest of the image. In any case that you do it, it's kind of pointless to post for critique.

Brush up on the anatomy of the buttocks down to the toes. The torsos are acceptable, but the butt and thigh on the girl look really strange.

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oh holy shit it's a lady

I glanced over it quickly and it looked like a dude getting plowed

ladies should not be mannish unless you are deliberately going for that

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Its awfully hard getting help around here it seems.

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Yes it is.

Any worthwhile posters that still come around are not here 98% of the time.

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Well ill keep hoping someday ill get a good second opinion on this.

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I guess the head could be slightly bigger or make the neck not as thick, though that's probably just my bias. Asides from that I can't find much wrong with it. If you're unhappy with the pose see if you can find a ref online of an animal in a similar pose and work off of that. If you're still unhappy with it practise drawing him in different poses to get a handle on how the character's body works and what you want the proportions to be like.

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Great job but the only thing that really bugs me is the thumb. It's too long and it makes the hand look unnatural and even uncomfortable. The right arm on the wolf also looks kinda off, the perspective just looks weird to me, I'd suggest finding a reference or even taking a picture of your own arm in the same position to help out

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the amount of straight lines used sort of bothers me.

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Yes ... the design is clearly needed to be changed :)
The dark green color would fit perfectly xD

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all I read is "hey I´m OP, I dont even try to draw, but guess what, I advice superior persons how to draw!"

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>>1490
Are you honestly being butthurt just to be butthurt?

I doubt you're Kyma or Adam.

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>>1490

Stop being an idiot. You don't need to be an artist to know how something should look, and he didn't say he wasn't, anyway. You strike me as a whiner if you think he's being a douche for presenting legitimate critique.

tl;dr stop being dumb

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I'm surprised to see this thread still around. Although, I suppose /crit/ doesn't get too many submissions compared to the other boards :<

>>1490
Don't get me wrong, I'm absolutely shit at drawing. I'm trying to get better, but fuck it's hard (heh. heh....). Still, pointing out stylistic elements that don't work well doesn't require a good artist. It just takes someone who's willing to look, and speak.

In related news, I've been watching a live streamer recently who does a really amazing job with faces, all the time. Her FA is Jailbird ( http://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/jailbird ). You guys should all go give her some love.

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Am i doin it rite?

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I smell a samefag

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All right then, concrit (and also my first post on Fchan, woo). In my opinion this image is boring. Drawing is a visual language and your image always needs to tell some sort of story, even if it's just supposed to be spank fodder. Who is this character and why is she in this situation? Is she enjoying it or not? I can't figure out whether she's supposed to be cheerfully showing herself off to the viewer or struggling and squirming in humiliation, and that's a pretty important distinction.

I'd suggest thinking about the situation you want to convey and starting over with a new pose that is designed to show that story. Pic related is two possible approaches. #1 (unwilling) has the character struggling - note that with a 3/4 view you would be able to see some of the spreader bar and I've pulled the tail up over it to highlight its existence and add a bit more flavor. #2 (willing) is more like your still pose, but with body language to show that she's quite happy where she is and enjoying the looks she's getting.

Tl;dr: give your character a personality, the work will be a lot better.

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>>1510
I assure you that posting was not mine. In the case of posting it in other threads, however, it's evident that people are simply skipping over said information and thus it needs to be brought down into their threads.

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>>1512

I can see what you mean and I can already see the way in which your sketch conveys a lot more about the scene. Thanks very much for the advice and I'll give it a go.

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>>1513

Yes some people suck and need to have that told to them, but for the most part it just gets posted in every single thread here regardless of art quality.

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What's there to finish about it?

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>>1533

well, when I started it, I had the idea that there was going to be a ton of characters in that scene, twilight and DJ-pon in the foreground, big mac in the background protecting applebloom who's on the ground hurt. Rarity being turned to stone by a cockatrice. with the entirety of ponyville in chaos. The idea was that whatever was in everfree forest invades ponyville. There was also going to be an Ursa Major wrapped around the town hall while swatting at rainbow dash. Basically a very intricuit scene with a lot of elements. I started thinking that maybe that's a bit too busy for one picture. But as I stated above, I got sidetracked by another project and never came back to this.

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NORMAN ROCKWELL

The man was amazing at piecing together references from photos and using them in a fresh, lively fashion that made the imagery accurate and appealing. He knew how to bend the rules and adjust a reference correctly.

Instead of getting defensive about your "style," reevaluate where you actually intend on going with it. Oh and read this:
http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=130468

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Thank you, this is - constructive criticism and useful! Got a lot of information for reflection, it will try to come-in the following works.

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Thank you very much for the constructive criticism and a great article (although having trouble with English). but now I finally abide in an impasse with respect to anthropomorphic characters. anthropomorphic - because of people like, means the boundary of a vague as ever ...

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some cute cat? painted in the style of realism. with bloody claws, corpses, and the other by appropriate attributes? I want to somehow combine the faces of the people and the essence of the animal.

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I wish I knew someone who spoke your language as well as English well enough to get the point across. I feel that is our barrier right now and unfortunately there isn't much else I can do.
I'm sorry.